MY CAR

HI.I AM A WOMAN AND A GRANDMOTHER. WHEN I WAS SHILD, I USED RAIDE MY BICYCLE.BUT WHEN I RETIRED,I BOUGHT .A CAR. I T'S COLOR RED.MY CAR'S FROM GERMANY.IT'S A MAN'S AND WOMAN'S.MY CAR'S OLD, ABOUT 20-TY JEARS .BUT IT'S FAST,EASY, SMALL AND CHEAP. I 'M VERY SATISFIED WITH IT GOOD BYE

Hi, Laimute! THANK YOU VERY MUCH! Thank you for your story! It is a nice story!
Sveika, Laimute! DĖKUI TAU LABAI! Dėkui už pasakojimą. Tai yra geras pasakojimas.

Please:
Prašau:
1.Check out your mistakes.
Pažiūrėkite į savo klaidas
2. Correct your mistakes in your comment.
Pataisykite savo klaidas komentare (REIKIA SPAUSTI MYGTUKĄ TAISYTI JŪSŲ KOMENTARO APAČIOJE)
3. Learn to tell your story for our class.
Išmokite papasakoti savo istoriją mūsų pamokai.

BYE!
IKI!

GOOD DAY! I AM A WOMAN AND A GRANDMOTHER. (prieš daiktavardį reikia artikelio!) WHEN I WAS SHILDREN (=A CHILD; neteisingai pavartota daugiskaita - CHILDREN), I WAS RAID,D WITH BICYCLE (- neteisingas praeities laikas; =I USED TO RIDE A BICYCLE),BAT (=BUT) WHEN I BE PENS IONED OFF (=RETIRED -IŠĖJAU Į PENSIJĄ),I WAS BUY,D (=BOUGHT) THE (=A, NEŽYMIMAS ARTIKELIS, NES PIRMĄKART UŽSIMENATE ) CAR. IT'S RED OF COLOR (NEREIKIA; ARBA GALIMA SAKYTI : "ITS COLOR IS RED"- JOS SPALVA RAUDONA) .MY CAR'S FROM GERMANY (NES SAKOTE "IŠ" (FROM) VOKIETIJOS). IT'S FOR A MAN'S AND FOR WOMAN'S CAR. (IŠMOKITE IŠSIREIŠKIMĄ: A MAN'S CAR , A WOMAN'S CAR = VYRIŠKA (MOTERIŠKA) MAŠINA). MY CAR'S OLD, ABOUT 20-TY JEARS (=YEARS) .BAT (=BUT) IT'S FAST, EASY TO PARK, SMALL AND SHEAP (=CHEAP). I 'M VERY SATISFIED WITH THEM (=IT, NES VIENASKAITA) . GOOD BAY(=BYE).

YOUR STORY WITHOUT (LIET. BE) MISTAKES:

GOOD DAY. I AM A WOMAN AND A GRANDMOTHER. WHEN I WAS A CHILD, I USED TO RIDE MY BICYCLE BUT WHEN I RETIRED I BOUGHT A CAR. I T'S RED . MY CAR'S FROM GERMANY. IT'S A MAN'S AND WOMAN'S CAR. MY CAR'S OLD, ABOUT 20-TY YEARS BUT IT'S FAST, EASY, SMALL AND CHEAP. I 'M VERY SATISFIED WITH IT. GOOD BYE.

Laimute, here is your homework. Can you find it? I moved your homework to the new place.
Laimute, čia Jūsų namų darbai. Ar galite juos surasti? Aš perkėliau Jūsų namų darbus į naują vietą.